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[] __**Costs:**__ [] [] 1. Average age is 21. 2. Part time student % is 1. 3. 53% white. 4. 9% Hispanic/ Latino. 5. 14% Asian. 6. 14% black. 7. 6% other. 8. 4% is mixed. 9. 53% men. 10. 95% return for sophomore year. 11. 30 miles from Baltimore, 3 miles from Washington, DC. 12. Application due date is Jan 20. 13. It’s a large student body and council. 14. 82% graduate within 6 years. 15. Co- Ed housing. 16. Alcohol drug and smoke free. 17. Special housing for disabled. 18. Newspaper. 19. Band. 20. Sports. [] 1) 18:1 student faculty ratio. 2) 20% Social Sciences. 3) 15% Business/Marketing. 4) 10% Engineering. 5) 9% Biology. 6) 7% Communications/Journalism. 7) 5% Education. 8) 5% Psychology. 9) Agriculture. 10) Architecture. 11) Area, Ethnic, Cultural, & Gender Studies. 12) Biological & Biomedical Sciences. 13) Business, Management, Marketing. 14) Communication, Journalism. 15) Computer & Information Sciences. 16) Education. 17) Engineering. 18) Family, Consumer & Human Sciences. 19) English Language, Literature & Letters. 20) Health Professions & Related Clinical Sciences.
 * __Random facts:__**
 * 1) Application due date is Jan 20.
 * 2) It’s a large student body and council.
 * 3) 82% graduate within 6 years.
 * 11,340 financial aid package.
 * 1) Research and internship at Smithsonian Institution, National Institutes for, NASA, US Capitol, White House, FBI.
 * 2) 95% return for sophomore year.
 * 3) Certificate degree.
 * 4) Bachelor's degree.
 * 5) Master's degree.
 * 6) Doctoral degree.
 * 7) 30 miles from Baltimore, 3 miles from Washington, DC.
 * 8) Average age is 21.
 * 9) Part time student % is 1.
 * 10) 53% white.
 * 11) 9% Hispanic/ Latino.
 * 12) 14% Asian.
 * 13) 14% black.
 * 14) 6% other.
 * 15) 4% is mixed.
 * 16) 53% men.
 * 23,101 is estimated on site cost.
 * 23,486 is estimated off site cost.
 * 15,928 is estimated at home cost.
 * 1) Fall 2012 First Year Students Part-Time Costs.
 * 2) Cost per credit hour instate $299.
 * 3) Cost per credit hour out of state $1,065.
 * 11,340 financial aid package for first year.
 * 1) Financial aid apply deadline feb 15.
 * 2) Respond date may 1.
 * 3) 47% of financial aid is for loans and jobs.
 * 4) 53% of financial aid is for scholarships and grants.
 * 5) Men scholarships for baseball. ([])
 * 6) Men scholarships for basketball. ([])
 * 7) Men scholarships for football. ([])
 * 8) Men scholarships for wrestling. ([])
 * 9) Women scholarships for cheer leading. ([])
 * 10) Women scholarships for softball. ([])
 * 11) Women scholarships for volleyball. ([])
 * 12) Women scholarships for gymnastics. ([])
 * 13) Women scholarships for field hockey. ([])
 * __Campus life__:**
 * __Majors in learning:__**


 * __Informative Essay Outline:__**

Directions: Identify three details that would be relevant to prospective students wishing to enroll in the college/university you researched.


 * //__D__////__etail #1__// __Costs:__**

To get in to College Park University you must not only do well in school, but you must either be from a wealthy family or get a scholarship.
 * //__Topic__// //__Sentence:__//**

//The// costs to get into maryland state is 23,101 estimated for onsite cost, 23,486 are estimated off site cost and 15,928 are estimated at home cost.11,340 is the financial aid package for the first year. The Financial aid apply deadline is Feb 15and the Respond date may 1. They use 47% of financial aid for loans and jobs, and use 53% of financial aid for scholarships and grants. They also have many scholarships for men and women in the sport section.
 * //__Supporting Sentences:__//**

After reading this you can see if you are even legible fund wise to attend Maryland State.
 * //__Concluding Sentence:__//**


 * //__Detail #2__// __majors in learning:__**

They have many choices to study and major in. They major in 20% Social Sciences, 15% Business/Marketing, 10% Engineering, 9% Biology, 7% Communications/Journalism, 5% Education, and 5% Psychology. They have almost a class for any career. The list is huge and they have any job that major in, Agriculture, Architecture, Area, Ethnic, Cultural, & Gender Studies, Biological & Biomedical Sciences, Business, Management, Marketing, Communication, Journalism, Computer & Information Sciences, Education, Engineering, Family, Consumer & Human Sciences, English Language, Literature & Letters, Health Professions & Related Clinical Sciences. Maryland University is open to many different career pathways.
 * //__Topic Sentence:__//**
 * //__Supporting Sentences:__//**
 * //__Concluding Sentence:__//**


 * __Detail #3__ __Campus life:__**

Campus life at Maryland State is a safe and comfortable living area that contends to many different type of people.
 * //__Topic Sentence:__//**

The Average age is 21. The races of the students is, 53% white, 9% Hispanic/ Latino, 14% Asian, 14% black, 6% other, and 4% is mixed. 95% return for sophomore year at Maryland and it is located 30 miles from Baltimore, and 3 miles from Washington, DC. It’s a large student body and council and 82% students will graduate within 6 years. There are Co-Ed housing, a safe alcohol, drug, and smoke free school and campus area. Not to mention they have special housing for the disabled students attending To keep students busy in their free time they have newspaper, band, and sports. Maryland college park is one of the finest campuses on the east side.
 * //__Supporting Sentences:__//**
 * //__Concluding Sentence:__//**


 * Three-Prong Thesis Statement:** (This is one statement which includes your three details)

To attend Maryland State you need to do well in school and be wealthy enough to attend. They major in many different subjects and have very nice and safe campuses making Maryland State: College Park one of the best colleges on the east coast.

"Start an AP Course in 7 Simple Steps." // College Admissions //. N.p., n.d. Web. 10 Oct. 2012. .
 * __Citation:__**

__College essay By JPaul Bonan__ (rough draft)

To get in to College Park University you must not only do well in school, but you must either be from a wealthy family or get a scholarship. This is one obstacle to overcome to get into Maryland State. The costs to get into Maryland state are 23,101 estimated for onsite cost, 23,486 are estimated off site cost and 15,928 are estimated at home cost.11, 340 is the financial aid package for the first year. The Financial aid apply deadline is Feb 15and the Respond date may 1. They use 47% of financial aid for loans and jobs, and use 53% of financial aid for scholarships and grants. They also have many scholarships for men and women in the sport section. After reading this you can see if you are even legible fund wise to attend Maryland State.

They have many choices to study and major in. Maryland State: College park is one of the best colleges because of their large amount of careers to study. They major in 20% Social Sciences, 15% Business/Marketing, 10% Engineering, 9% Biology, 7% Communications/Journalism, 5% Education, and 5% Psychology. They have almost a class for any career. The list is huge and they have any job that major in, Agriculture, Architecture, Area, Ethnic, Cultural, & Gender Studies, Biological & Biomedical Sciences, Business, Management, Marketing, Communication, Journalism, Computer & Information Sciences, Education, Engineering, Family, Consumer & Human Sciences, English Language, Literature & Letters, Health Professions & Related Clinical Sciences. They give scholarships to Women for cheerleading, for softball, for volleyball, for gymnastics or even field hockey. For men they give scholarships for baseball, for basketball, for football, And wrestling. Maryland University is open to many different career pathways.

Campus life at Maryland State is a safe and comfortable living area that contends to much different type of people. The Average age is 21. The races of the students is, 53% white, 9% Hispanic/ Latino, 14% Asian, 14% black, 6% other, and 4% is mixed. 95% return for sophomore year at Maryland and it is located 30 miles from Baltimore, and 3 miles from Washington, DC. It’s a large student body and council and 82% students will graduate within 6 years. There are Co-Ed housing, a safe alcohol, drug, and smoke free school and campus area. Not to mention they have special housing for the disabled students attending. To keep students busy in their free time they have newspaper, band, and sports. They have many after school activities because studies show that students who are involved in Sports, study groups, or many other things seem to get better grades and are less likely to get into trouble. Maryland college park is one of the finest campuses on the east side.

To attend Maryland State you need to do good in school and be wealthy enough to attend. They major in many different subjects and have very nice and safe campuses making Maryland State: College Park one of the best colleges on the east coast.